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he felt, questions limited his perception.
Which they did for quite a while.
Questions bothered him;
Questions altered his state of mind;
Questions confused him.
Full stops, or as he liked to call them, periods
A Period always followed the question
he felt terrible for questioning the drill;
he felt stupid for asking;
Questioned, he still.
he questioned impractically, (
m y o
p i c Q u es tions.
)
The Question and The Comma were connected with
A Period.A period.a period.periods ;
Stuck in a sentence, he was overandoverandoverAndOVER again.
Don’t ask a lot maybe
I thought.
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18/11/2018
After a year and eight days of experiences, why
he thought:
There, fixed it,
No depressing full stops
To block curiosity :)
Just a modified trauma,
and strengthened the comma
- Jay Patel, DP 1